Priminerster writing.

Narrative Writing





WALT use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.





Your task: This term’s inquiry is all about working well as a team. Create a narrative/story. In your story, a group of children have just received a letter in the mail:

















Planning:





Characters:April and September.


Setting/ where:in candy land.


Problem:the priminerster get kidnapped


Resolution:the priminerster gets saved.





Write your story here:


“Ouch! Why is the ground so hot” April shouted as she walked to the letter box.April was just a normal candyland girl. She had beautiful blue long curly hair, She had shimmery blue eyes, a amazing candy mansion and she had a fantastic life, but she didn’t feel amazing. April had the biggest crush on a boy named September. September was a normal candyland boy. He had dark blue hair that slicked to the side, he had aqua blue eyes,he had the most coolest candy mansion and he had a fantastic life to. He just felt like there was something missing in his life. He also had the most biggest crush on April, but she didn’t know that.






When April got to the letter box she found a letter and it said her name on it. She started to walk staring at the letter eager to open it. Once she got inside she opened the envelope and she saw that it was a letter from the priminerster of the candy land. It said that she had to set up a party for the priminerster and her family. She only had 24 hours and she could bring a plus one to the party. She really wanted to take September, but then she realised that she needed to prep a party for the priminerster. April was the most excited girl in the whole candy land. She ran from the candy shop to the party shop to the confetti shop. April was exhausted, she lay on her couch and she turned on the tv. Immediately the news turned on, it said that the priminerster was adultnapped!






April knew that she had to do something so she drove her car to Septembers house. When she got to his house she was dripping with sweat.Moments later she knocked on the door and it opened. September said “ hi April.” April said nervously “ will you help me find the priminerster that got adultnapped.” September said “of course I will.” So they set off to find the priminerster.





Driving as fast as they could they came past a building that looked very suspicious. The building was old and it had a sign on it that said come in we have free candy. The two children decided to run into the building. When they got in the building they started to look around. After a few minutes they found a scarf and it was the scarf that the priminerster wore. The scarf had a clue on it that said that the priminerster might be close, but she is very far and then there was a strawberry logo. September said “ it is kinda like they are watching our every move.”






They tried to figure out the riddle, but they couldn’t. They hoped in the car and started to drive around a little bit. Then April figured it out. She shouted “ I know where she is!” April led September to a old crusty building. September looked at the building and realised that there was a strawberry on the door. September told April about the strawberry and April said “I know.” “This was the old building that caught on fire and killed my dad.” April said. They pulled the strawberry of the door and it said to go into the building. They went into the building and there she was. It was the priminerster. She was tied to a old crusty chair. The priminerster started clapping.She said “ you passed the test. This whole thing was to test your determination to save me. We do this on everybody in the whole candy world. If they don’t pass then we wipe their memory, but if they pass then we don’t.” April was so relieved that the priminerster was alive. They had a humongous feast that the assistants prepared for the priminerster family and April. They lived happily ever after.