Kia pai te kotahi narative

Narrative Writing

WALT use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.

Your task: This term’s inquiry is all about working well as a team. Create a narrative/story. In your story, a group of children are going to get stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti. Tell the story of how the group got there and how they get off the island.

Planning:

Characters: two boy twins and a robot.

Setting/ where: on a stranded island in thin air.

Problem: Stranded on an island with nothing but a rope, a chilly bin and two cans of spaghetti.

Resolution: they use their tools.

Write your story here:



“Can I see your ticket please?” The flight attendant asked the two boys. “Oh, you are flying by yourself. Come with me I will take you to first class.” The flight attendant said.





They walked to first class and the two boys thought they were the only ones there, but they weren't. Once the boys got to their seats they realised that there was a famous man named Paul. This man was a famous singer. He asked, “Hey, aren't you Tom and Jerry? I know your dad. He is famous in the business world.”





Tom and Jerry said, “Yeah.”





Once the two boys were settled, for some reason they wanted spaghetti. So the flight attendant, named Hannah, got the boys some spaghetti. Tom and Jerry tried to open the can and they did, but the can flew and broke the window. Then the lid smashed the two boys in the nose and they fell out the window. Hannah the attendant didn’t know because the boys were in a different seat.





Boof! Boof! Boof! The clouds went as the boys crashed down. Crash went the boys as they fell to the island. Tom and Jerry woke up, they realised that they were on a island floating in thin air. When they looked around they saw that there was a chilly bin, 2 cans of spaghetti and a rope. They ran to the thing’s, but then a robot stood up and looked at them in the eye. The robot said “ welcome to the island of nothing. I am the only one that lives here.” Tom and Jerry said “ hi.” The boys walked to the cans of spaghetti and they opened them and ate them. It came to night time so the robot pulled some blankets out of his ear and put them on the boys.





When it was morning Tom and Jerry were playing with the robot. They soon realised that there was a button on the side of the robots body. They pressed it and he turned into a jetpack. The boys were amazed. Tom said “ this is the way we can get of the island.” Tom asked the robot if he could take them home. The robot said “ yes.” The robot turned into a jetpack, they tied the rope to the robot and they put some coconuts in the chili bin. They tied themselves to the rope and they headed home. Once they got home they said “ thank you” and then the robot headed home. They both lived happily ever after.


This week I had to do a narrative for my writing. We had to include one group of children, two cans of spaghetti, a rope and a chili bin. Other than that we could put anything in our writing that we wanted to. I really hope you like my writing for this week.