The Dangerous Writing Challenge.

As the kitten jumps from rock to rock it stops. It realises that the jump is to long so it sits there waiting for help. It meows and meows until the kitten sees a elephant that is willing to help it. The elephant pulls out its trunk and helps the kitten out of the water. The kitten is so relieved until the elephant drops the kitten and the kitten lands on the same rock again. the elephant is says sorry to the kitten and tries again. the elephants trunk reaches out one more time and it works. the kitten is so thankful bacuse te lake has just started to rise. the elephant says " don't worry" Thank you so much the kitten says one more time. the kitten and the elephant become friends. they decide to take a swim
in the lake. the kitten does not mind if he gets wet.

This is a writing challenge that we had to do. It is called the "Dangerous Writing Challenge".  We only had five minutes to do it and if you stopped writing you would fail and you would have to start again. I made some mistakes and I fixed some, but then realised that we can't fix it. I hope you enjoy.

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