Writing

One stormy day a teenage boy called Slinky was waiting for the bus in front of his house to go to Tuaranga, but the bus went past him because it didn't see him and he cried " Why!!!!!!!" But suddenly he remembered that his mum put a safety phone in his bag. After that he shouted "hip hip hooray hip hip hooray!!!" he rang his mother and said " Can you pick me up?" His mother said "Ok." Then he was so excited to go to Tauranga.