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Wednesday 30 October 2019

Monday 21 October 2019

Woosh, Ping...




Today we played a game called, Woosh/Ping. It is all about acting and performances. It is called this because we have to pass the noises in the name that it is called(Woosh/ Ping). It was so much fun and I hope that we can do it again. I learn't how to concentrate, and listen to when people make a noise. Try this out. This is called a theatre game. 




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Friday 18 October 2019

Practice writing test



Playing in the sun was so nice, back then I didn’t have any responsibilities and I wish I could go back to that, but let's get back to the story… It was a beautiful sunny day and I was doing some planting with my nana,this was all the way back in 2013 when I was 4.

My nana called me, but I didn’t really hear her because my ears were so tiny, but also I was pretty far away. My nana came to me and said,
“Come on Kiarah, let’s go inside and have some food.”
We walked to the stairs and walked up them. I ran up 5 stairs and then something bad happened. I slipped! Slipping down the stairs I felt a feeling of horror run through my body. I just closed my eyes and hoped for the best. In reality, I knew that it was going to end badly. When I got to the bottom of the stairs I still had my eyes closed, but I knew something was wrong.

The smell of blood ran through nose, I was still at the bottom of the stairs. I tried to get up multiple times, but it was like I was a manacane- I couldn’t move!

My nana saw me lying there and ran over to me. I felt a tear run down my face, I wanted to cry, but I couldn’t… I was too shocked. My nana dialed 111, for an ambulance. My nana tried to pick me up, but I was bleeding so much that she couldn’t.

A couple minutes later the ambulance arrived and they put me on the wheely bed and wheeled me in the ambo. In the background I could hear my nana talking to the ambulance driver. I had a blurry vision of the ambulance driver.

Before I knew it I had passed out. An hour later I woke up, now I'm left with a scar on my forehead and my eyebrow. That was the most painful moment of my life, and I don’t want it to happen again. I'm proud of my scars though. Take care of yourself...

times table


Tuesday 15 October 2019

pick a place


Rolling dice


who am i


Adding detail task.

WALT add supporting detail/ideas to our writing
WALT write a range of correct sentence types 

During the holiday, I went to the beach with my friends. We saw there was a volleyball net. We asked a family if we could borrow their volleyball. We played volleyball for about an hour then had some lunch. Before we went home, we gave the volleyball back to the family. I had a lot of fun at the beach with my friends.

Read this simple recount.
What do you notice about the recount?

It only uses one sense, and it has used lots of we’s

What could we add to this recount to make it more detailed?

More senses and interesting words.

Edit this recount above to make it more detailed:

During the holiday, I went to a sunny beach with my friends. We saw in the distance that there was a volleyball net. We loved to play volleyball. We saw a family and asked if we could borrow their volleyball. They were very generous and said yes.

We played volleyball for a whole hour, it was that fun. I hit the volleyball, but then slipped. While Hearing my friends laughing at me I realised that there was sand in my mouth. It was so crunchy and dry. I ran as fast as I could to the water without even thinking. I jumped in and felt stupid for not thinking that it would be this cold. It smelt very salty. The waves were swishing me from side to side. They were very loud, like they were smashing against a rock.

I quickly got out of the cold water shivering, with sand still stuck between my teeth. I got a towel and wrapped myself up in it.

After warming up, I then had a refreshing cup of lemonade. Before we packed up and went home, we gave the volleyball back to the generous and kind family. They were very nice.

I had a blast at the beach and I hope that I can do this again. I hope my friends had a blast too. I felt so happy hopping in the car imagining having a nice hot shower.



This task is about fixing up a recount that our teacher gave us. We had to find out what was wrong with it and what we needed to add to make it more interesting. I added more of our senses and interesting words. I hope you enjoy.

Life's a stage Animation planner

Monday 14 October 2019

D'mic


Life's a stage brain storm


This is a brain storm that we did to think of all of the words that relate to drama and Life's a stage. I hope you enjoy.

The most dangerous writing challenge

they were getting closer and closer, yesterday berlin, today paris, but when would they hit london? we were running out of time and we had nowhere to go. we would just stay in london and hop for the best.

The news flicked on and it said that people where getting killed, people were running and people were fighting. it was any moment now that they would come to our city and destroy us all.

a moment later I could hear screaming outside and gun shots, could this really be the end of the world-I thought to myself. no it couldn't be I was to young to die, I still wanted to have children get married and have my first kiss! I was so worried I couldn't stop thinking that I was going to die.

AS I was thinking I looked out the window and saw a creature. buzzzzzzzzzz! the tv cut out, booooo! a man shouted I screamed, but it was too late...


This is a writing challenge that we had to do. It is called the "Dangerous Writing Challenge".  We only had five minutes to do it and if you stopped writing you would fail and you would have to start again. I made some mistakes and I fixed some, but then realised that we can't fix it. I hope you enjoy.