Caring for this creature is a challenging task and should not be taken on without serious thought. To take care of my dragon well if I had one, I would make everything out of wood for my dragon and I would put fabric on the couch, bed and pillow. When he is hungry I will give him some roasted meat and some marshmallow.
Dragons are playful creature and they love to play games with children. I would play with it at the park and I would let it go down the slide, go back and forwards on the monkey bars, fly through the tunnel, climb up the latter and have fun. He needs to play because he can’t be a gamer like people that stay up all night just to play video games so that is why I let him play outside.
name:bony
Kiarah - Wow what a great piece of descriptive writing. I really enjoyed how you wrote such fantastic words that created an image in my head that was able to let me know exactly what was happening. I really enjoyed the paragraphing that you wrote as well and the fact that the writing was different for each one. Would there be any problems with owning a dragon?
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Hi Kiarah,
ReplyDeleteI am so happy to see that you are carrying on being a creative and original writer! Your description of the size of your dragon is wonderful: "It is so tiny that it sits on only two fingers of the human hand." When you were in Year 1 or Year 2 you might have just said "My dragon is little."
I think I could manage to eat the same diet as your dragon - I LOVE roast mean and toasted marshmallows! I adore the way toasted marshmallows get all gooey on the inside and scalding hot on the outside!
From Ms Nalder
thankyou miss nalder your the best.
Deletekia ora Kiarah
ReplyDeleteWhat a amazing dragon it look so real it was amazing.Your ideas were great i loved them.I hope you also have a dragon.Kepp up the good work. Hope to see more work like this.
From Anglica
kia ora kiarah your dragon is so amazing it's so good. from Suade
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