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Monday 1 November 2021

PEEL - Paragraph Plan and Draft

 In this PEEL blog-post I am starting to form a explanation story using PEEL. The piece of writing is my draft piece and the picture is a plan of my overall story. My topic/title is: How do people connect using devices. Enjoy :)

PLAN:


DRAFT:


How do people connect using devices?

We connect with others in a lot of different ways. The way we connect most, is by using devices.


Devices are everywhere and we use them on a daily basis. Connecting using a device is so popular in the human world. 


It is easier to connect using a device. There are many ways to connect, you can email, call, zoom, and even chat on google docs.


People carry around devices all the time, and having a conversation on the phone is very normal. Now that we are in lock-down, people are zooming like there no tomorrow.


If we review these topics we can see that connecting online is part of human nature.


It wouldn’t be “earthly” if we used devices for things other than games and work. Connecting online is apart of our lives and makes a huge impact on our conversations and day to day life.







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