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Tuesday, 23 February 2021

Explanation Writing - Why is Schooling the most Important part of you life?


We are learning to correctly structure an explanation essay. Our question is Why is Schooling the most Important part of you life? We had to create three reasons why we think it's so important. This took a lot more thinking and planning then I thought, please leave a positive comment!

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Kiarah,

    I enjoyed reading your explanation as it was clear - I understood what you were explaining which is key (hence the name of the genre!). Next time I would love to see an introduction which introduces school - what is it and why does it exist? You could also summarise your main ideas in the conclusion. Overall it was great work - especially impressive that you completed it in a short time frame after being out at softball.

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  2. Hi Miss Stone,
    I sure will try doing that next time. I tried my best to finish it off properly!
    From Kiarah

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